Music video: "Fast Life"

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Tom_Vayianos

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Hey guys, this is a music video I made for an underground rapper in Boston that I'd like to get some constructive criticism on...

YOUTUBE: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eozKdEti4AE
QUICKTIME: http://www.ifitwasntforrap.com/videos/FastLife_web1.mov

I made a couple music videos in high school and a few more since I've been in college, but this is the first one I actually planned out before shooting, shot in more than one day, etc... I'd really appreciate some feedback and opinions on what I can do to improve for the next one, because I'm going back to school in September and will definitely be shooting more music videos while I'm there.

Thanks!

-Tom
 
Looks good. Maybe its a taste issue but most like 24p.... looks like it was shot 30p. I would say its almost too clean.... maybe add a little dirt to the image, some grain or something.
 
looks good all though i feel the shots of the traffic etc. were a little boring after seeing it a few times.
doesnt help that the song is terrible :) dude sounds like he could have some skills but i thought the lyrics were bad and the beat was wack. thats just my $.02. I probably would have done some more shots of the city and him on the street etc.
 
I would have like to see more motion either with the artist or in the settings/background. The cuts in the beginning could be a little quicker (or more cuts, I think they were quite lengthy) I like how it makes me focus either more on the artist or the song itself. It has a real like feel to it. Congrats on your video and I hope my comments help.
 
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