thanks for your patience. I changed the embedding so it should play now. I am uploading a brighter version because I have been getting a lot of feedback about it being too dark. Usual web compression problem.
It should be up by tonight. Sorry for the problems.
From what I was able to watch I would of like to see some performance cut with the story line in the first part of the video. In the bedroom it looked a little grainy! But from what I seen so far not bad. I liked in the beginning of the random shots!
Story is pretty good. I just don't like your jumpcuts in the beginning. Also when he steps into the car, 180-degree rule isn't broken, but the shot choice could have been better there, it's just too confusing. There is indeed a lot of grain where they sit on the washing machine, it's in the video, not the compression. It is still better then a lot of videos I'v seen around here.
Some dark areas, but you can fix those in post (mainly the car shots). Get rid of that ending of the bat though. slow-mo looks bad, and just doesn't fit.
JoChem: One of the jump cuts it especially abrupt because its really dark and you can't see him moving. I agree with your comment about him getting into the car, we had the same issue when editing, but we didn't have anything better to cut to.
LlodyC: Sorry but this is the final edit. Some more CC is going to be done and some censoring for public display. The car shots are actually a composite but I intentially over exposed the background plates to make it look more believable.
Also the we version makes all of the darker areas blend together. It is a little dark overall but it really brings out the grain to change the curves too much.
Really good, few ruff spots (like 3 or 4), but really good. Obviously your artist' worked with you and didn't try to do the whole thing in like 3 hours. I'm in love with the babe on the couch. hehe...the perks of the biz...