SHORT: "Move Past It" - short DSLR film

Very nice work, Cameron. Very consistent visual style throughout the film, which gives the film a wonderful athmosphere. The music fits beautifully. The only thing I didn't like was the "Brechtian" moment where she writes on a napkin and shows it to the camera, which I thought was out of place.

Keep up the great work!

Best regards,

Christian Hovland Grevstad
 
Nice short. Production wise I thought it was great. Sometimes I couldn't hear what the VO said, but only in a few instances.
On the part where she writes the note, it does look like she is showing the camera but I'm guessing it was for the person sitting across from her in the wider shot?
The music is what held me until the end, but I can't say I loved the payoff (the ending) for watching the whole thing, though it is damn good for a short.
That last scene was lit beautifully, and I'm proud that you as a director did your own cinematography, and was the editor. Good for you.
I work the same way, wearing all those hats and seeing the whole thing through is what I say makes you a filmmaker.
Great job.
 
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