SHORT: Moments (Spy film)

I wished the ending was different.

1) If he knew they were coming for him, he would have taken precautions instead of sitting in his living room unarmed just waiting.

2) The car could have blown up with a bomb left in that bag for them.

3) He could also be harder to find, hunt down.
 
What was it you thought might be different about it? I honestly couldn't tell the difference between this and the hundred other "spy" movies I've seen with teenagers pretending to be adults. Shaky cam isn't your friend, by the way.
 
When I said "something different" I meant different from what I usually film or create. I wanted to do something involving a v.o or more character driven I was trying to experiment. As for shaky cam, I don't have money for a stabilizer so I work with the means I have.
 
It looked like camcorder videos and there was no lighting and overall look was you know, flat.No mood.
 
FONZOfilms said:
Hey guys check out my new short, I wanted to do something different so let me know what you think. Feedback is always appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEmzs...el_video_title
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Gave me the impression of the "Replacement Killers"(1998), or so... Perhaps I went to the wrong spy school, but some joker walking around with a shotgun, blasting away, casually walking out to the car... well, just doesn't add up to 'spy' action...

I'll also agree that the 'spy' was pretty easily found and dealt with...

And of course no hot sex sizzle either... why be a spy or a hired killer if there's no 'fringe' benefits...

And one other thing... black text on a dark grey renders the message unreadable..
 
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