Modern Day Apocalypse

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Longfellow

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Hey guys, my first post! I hope there will be many more. So I thought I'd post our first "moderately decent" IMO short film. We shot it on an old Panasonic camera cant remember the name of it ( No 24p! Dang! I could get it if u wanted it). I recently got a Panasonic AG-DVX 100B and its pretty sweet. So yeah, just wanted to maybe hear some feedback on the film, I know theres a few amateurish mistakes (we filmed it almost a year ago) but constructive criticism would be appreciated. Peace.

Da link

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=286435293585421443&q=modern+day+apocalypse&hl=enhttp://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=286435293585421443&q=modern+day+apocalypse&hlen
 
Hey, well I'm about 7 mins into it. It's longer than I thought, lol. I gotta pause it, have supper then watch the rest.

Some editing problems here and there. So far you have my interest, and you potray the feeling of loneliness very well with the long shots and the sillouetted shots. But my beef is the pacing and timing. Obviously it's a bit slower than other films, but perhaps it drags on a bit too much at some points. I mean it's been about 7 minutes and he's woken up in a strange place, was almost run over, saw some birds and then talked to a couple for a few seconds... not much happened in those 7 minutes.

Anyways, gonna watch the rest later. I'm interested in this...
 
I alwyas knew Jean shorts would prevail. They're like the perfect post apocolyptic attire.
 
Haha, ya at first we were gonna go with cordoroy but who uses cords in post apocalyptic situations? Whatd you guys think, honestly even if you think sucked?
 
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