SHORT: Miniature Warfare - (Stop Motion)

Hello, here is a Miniature stop motion short ive been working on over the past few months depicting tank warfare during the Battle of the Bulge during WW2.


Ive just been posting it around to get some feedback on it.

Hope you enjoyed, thanks.
 
I thought that was really cool. I think you were going for a "tank rumble" effect with the shaky camera which was cool, but I think it was a little too present and constant sometimes to the point it was a little distracting. I think maybe a few well timed shakes when the tanks were up close to the camera would be enough, but that's just nitpicking. Loved when the soldier got shot and the blood hit the screen.....really cool.
 
Yeh i hope to get a bit better with the camera motion, so it seems a bit more realistic and less repetitive, also it would be good to get the angles and camera movments a little more dynamic, right now alot of it is pretty stationary but i think whip pans from one direction to the other will be pretty cool and give the overall look of the film more scope. i assume alot of that will involve camera tracking and maybe tracking markers ?
 
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