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[mentatDUKE]

This was an interesting experimental film. Not too many have tried something like this in the fest, so you get points for thinking outside the box and trying something different.

I couldn't really get a handle on what type of tone you were trying to convey. I don't think the imagery and music quite matched with the spoken words. The words were deep and introspective, but everything else was light and fun almost.

Still, this was an interesting film and I think I'll remember it for a while and will definitely rewatch it again soon.

 

[RyanT]

This sort of stuff is not usually my cup of tea, but there are definitely a few things that I did like. The closeups of the eye was really nice, and I liked that desolate location you had. That windiness is always nice when you don't have to record audio

As others have already said though, the rock music felt a little out of place. I wish you had found a way to make smoother transitions from the man talking to him standing on the road. Interesting film though, nice job.