SHORT: Man's Best Friend - short film

[PegLeg Media]

This was my first short film using the GH2. I also used a flycam nano and the stock 14-42mm lens. Looking for some feedback and what to improve on, this was my first short with a dslr so go easy on me.

Anyway, here it is, Man's Best Friend - based off an episode of the twilight zone

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8GyRXWTiEfw

sorry the embedding code isnt working

 

[Kholi]

Good instinct on the cut back from the flashback, showing he's hurt. And, starting to see some good comps.

I'd say, in the future, look for places to trim the fat so that it flows better.

Thanks for postin' up.