SHORT: Malice (shot with GH2, Sedna hack)
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HDkilledFILM.
Burnin' down the House
Honestly some of the best work I've seen in a long time. You set the mood, got the performances, kept the right pace. It's a simple piece that is flawless in it's execution. Bravo. Keep making work like this. PLEASE.-Adam
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reem12
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What a powerful little short. I echo the words of Hdkilledfilm. Great lighting and cinematography as well as execution of story. I understand its only so much info you can put into a story but although there seems to be some missing pieces to how he lost his daughter and got to where he is, at least to me. I get it.
You also did the Gh2 a great service. My only minor gripes is that you would have kept the subtitles throughout and cleaned up a few color corrections, in which in my opinion would have made this a near flawless short. Wish you the very best with this and hope it is entered in festivals.
You also did the Gh2 a great service. My only minor gripes is that you would have kept the subtitles throughout and cleaned up a few color corrections, in which in my opinion would have made this a near flawless short. Wish you the very best with this and hope it is entered in festivals.
Thank you reem12! There are idd some faults in this version. (color is some shots, subtitels, just like you said. And other little things) This version will be online for a week, after that week I"ll update it to the final version.
And about the backstory of my character. I had an extra scene: at the house, he normally went inside and spoke with malice. Then you saw his ex-wife.. etc, all a dream of course.In that scene I told something about their history. But in Post production I chose not to use it. The scene wasn't like i hoped it to be.
thank you (my english is not that good, so maybe i use sometimes the wrong words)
And about the backstory of my character. I had an extra scene: at the house, he normally went inside and spoke with malice. Then you saw his ex-wife.. etc, all a dream of course.In that scene I told something about their history. But in Post production I chose not to use it. The scene wasn't like i hoped it to be.
thank you (my english is not that good, so maybe i use sometimes the wrong words)
reem12
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Thank you for update and your english is plenty good for me to understand.
I'm a sucker for a good story and great visuals. And when I'm able to get a combination of both from the indie community I'm excited. Not enough concentration on good story telling like the old days. I applaud you once again for a great short.
On a side note, I had to discard some in my opinion, very key footage to my film as well, but combed through it over and over to see what i could take from it to connect the dots of my story without sacrificing quality. Best wishes.
I'm a sucker for a good story and great visuals. And when I'm able to get a combination of both from the indie community I'm excited. Not enough concentration on good story telling like the old days. I applaud you once again for a great short.
On a side note, I had to discard some in my opinion, very key footage to my film as well, but combed through it over and over to see what i could take from it to connect the dots of my story without sacrificing quality. Best wishes.