FEATURE: Mage Hunters

Wilbur Eddings

Wilbur Eddings

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A 'found footage' Fantasy Scifi Movie about a camera crew that run into a battle between a Mage and Squads of specialist 'Mage Hunters'.

I hope you enjoy the first cut of the Teaser (Not open to public yet).

 
Right, any input would be appreciated.

I am not happy with this teaser yet, so bring on the suggestions.

Target market is teens who play MMORPG's (World of Warcraft etc.)

Crits are also welcome, just be gentle, I am an old man!

;)
 
Don't put it up until you are happy with it.

My crits are that the font used looks like alien futuristic rather than medieval. There is way too much black. We want to see what you've got there.
 
Zblock said:
Don't put it up until you are happy with it.

My crits are that the font used looks like alien futuristic rather than medieval. There is way too much black. We want to see what you've got there.
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Thanks for the input, I was a bit insecure about that font.
What do you mean by 'we want to see what you've got there'.?
If you could clarify I would be most grateful.
Thanks.

Jesse Brauning said:
I'd say ditch all the words.
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Someone suggested that this side too. (At the studio).
Do you suggest just short fx shot to black x2 and 'Boom' Mage Hunters' or more a footage?
Thanks
 
I don't want to be cruel, but your motion graphics look very amateurish. (Bad font choice, stilted motion, odd color choice). I'd suggest either getting a professional to create motion titles for you or removing them all together.
 
Not cruel at all, this is a passion project to get me better on all fronts as a Director so I really want to get this stuff right myself.

Admittedly I was a bit lazy to mess around with my Video co pilot titles in AE but your post has certainly put a boot under my ass.

Besides creative and movement, too much text?
 
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