Loyalty music video Re edits

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Nobody356

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Hey, I posted my latest(second) music video a few days or so ago and in that thread I said that the powers that be wanted a re edit with lots of things taken our. So here are the 3 versions of the video....the original version which I posted before, the final(corporate) version and an alternate version.

I felt like some parts of the new version are better but some are also worse and I'm hoping that people still like it. It wouldnt have been the way I would have re edited, but you know how it is...when the guys in suits talk...you have to listen.

let me know what you think heres the site with the 3 vids
http://www.cfaulisi.com/Loyalty.html

also, my website www.cfaulisi.com isbrand new so check it out and let me know what you think. Its really simple and I put together in a very short time because I'm so rushed but I hope it serves its purpose.

The new version is TOTALLY different so take a look.
 
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hey,

would anyone mind taking a look at this? I really wanna know what you think of the new version. Its a lot different and I was forced into makeing alot of changes andit hasnt been long enough to really be objective about the whole thing.

So yea, plz take a look....thanks
 
still noones checked out the new version? I feel like a fool bumping my stuff but it went off the front page and I'd really like to hear what people are thinking
 
I liked it. It's a good music video. I watched the final version.
I did not like the narrative though, it looked like you were trying to hard to sandwhich some kind of plot. I don't think the words matched the video.
Your band members didn't look like they were actually playing though, or singing. They didn't sell it and I dont think they belived it. At times it seemed dramatic but other times too comedic. I think you should pick one mood, and pick a smaller narrative like.. how the band met. or just cut it out all togethet because it seemes forced.
 
thanks for the feedback, the people who called for the re edit wanted a more concrete story line and wanted to make sure everyone could follow it. I'm suprised to hear you say that the band didnt look into it, because I actually thought they did a pretty good job. The whole re editing business was pretty frustrating for me . I liked that in the first version it was mostly just an interesting preformance video that had a plot that took a back seat.

thanks a ton for taking a look tho, anyone else mind lookin at it?
 
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