SHORT: Lone Wolf

nice airplane at the beginning... Don't be afraid to wait for the airplane untill it's gone....

Nice water sound also... Only to bad we don't see the water..... Was it realy realy realy realy realy necessary it was on that specific location and just at the waterfontain ?

Around 1:43 he's talking into the camera...And yes I know his eyes are looking at the guy, but for me he's talking into the camera....

You have shown you know how to push rec on a camera....But that's about it...Although the story could be the beginning for a good story.
 
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