local commercial...went 3D Stroke crazy

Very professional looking. I didn't like the music. Didn't seem to fit. Other than that I thought it looked great.
 
Looks nice man. One thing, I would have concidered using some better fonts instead of plain Arial looking onces. Would have make it look allot better. Just my 2cents.
 
Enflow said:
Looks nice man. One thing, I would have concidered using some better fonts instead of plain Arial looking onces. Would have make it look allot better. Just my 2cents.
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I disagree. I think plain fonts look more professional. Some people overdue fonts like crazy.

I keep with the simple guideline that simple is usually better.
 
Wow, I'm bummed that you guys didn't dig the music, I really liked it.

About the fonts, I am with the same opinion as Trunks4200...I tried dozens of different fonts for this spot and when it all came down to it, I decided to go simple. To be quite honest, I'm not 100% satisfied with my final pick, but it was the best at the time. I might try a few more before I send out the final version. thanks for the comments!
 
Really pro looking stuff! I especially liked the beginning with sound effects. I didn't like the violin stuff there. Simple fonts are always best. :thumbsup:

Anyway, very good work! Congrats! :beer:
 
Very professional.

One thing though, about 3/4 of the way in, a strange circle shows up in the right half of the screen (as the list of featurs is scrolling by).

Chris
 
Looks good.... the scrolling text did not fit the overall look and feel... I agree with EnFlow, so I'd suggest using something like Helvetica Neue... works well for tv*
 
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