Liquid Soul (a beverage spoof)

Already posted reply in your other thread... but here's a copy and paste from it.

Watched it all, and it was OK. First thing, it's over a minute and a half long, and I think you could still cut it down to under a minute. Maybe even 30 seconds. It just lingered too long.

I get the concept, but don't really find it funny. Others may, though, as comedy RARELY does it for me. I can see how other people may get a kick out of it, but I still think it needs to be tightened up.

good luck, and just my .02

-brown
 
Heh i loved the concept and found it funny, but like rcbrown said, i felt it was undermined by the lack of comic timing. It was a bit slow and draggy
 
What Malcolm said. Enjoyed it but needs major tightening up. And was that supposed to be thunder or did somebody keep dropping the mic??

Don't misunderstand. I think it's clever and has real potential. Good luck.
 
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