Hey guys, my name is Noah and I'm new here 
I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look at these 2 short videos I made, just testing out the "Lightsaber" effect.
If you could provide any feedback or constructive criticism at all, that would be awesome.
Noah vs. Charlie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LL3bK2BGRPU
^This was made for a film contest in Boise, Idaho, and it got second place and won $200. It was filmed with an old dinosaur handycam by an inexperienced, but good friend of mine. This was all choreography done on the spot.
Noah vs. Charlie 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGoAKdbHI-c
^This is the more visually well-done piece, I waited until it snowed and I made Charlie come over. It was only him and me on set, so it was incredibly difficult to set the scene with my 60D. There was no external lighting. For this one, I could really use some advice on how to color-correct the final product.
Thanks so much for your time, guys!
-NJRFilms1
I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look at these 2 short videos I made, just testing out the "Lightsaber" effect.
If you could provide any feedback or constructive criticism at all, that would be awesome.
Noah vs. Charlie:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LL3bK2BGRPU
^This was made for a film contest in Boise, Idaho, and it got second place and won $200. It was filmed with an old dinosaur handycam by an inexperienced, but good friend of mine. This was all choreography done on the spot.
Noah vs. Charlie 2:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGoAKdbHI-c
^This is the more visually well-done piece, I waited until it snowed and I made Charlie come over. It was only him and me on set, so it was incredibly difficult to set the scene with my 60D. There was no external lighting. For this one, I could really use some advice on how to color-correct the final product.
Thanks so much for your time, guys!
-NJRFilms1