last minute changes

[jjbrown]

Here is a link to my last project. Its for a non profit teenage ski program. Let me know what you think. I still have a week before due date. Any comments, advice, "i would of, I wouldn't have done that," scenes that don't work together, color correction.
thanks in advance
jamie
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=URhjQa5RwoQ
sorry about the quality, one of these days I'll figure it out.

 

[ryan brown]

Can't really comment on the CC, cause like you stated, the quality is pretty bad.

Overall, I dig it. I'd lose some of the random b-roll shots that pop up throughout, especially the bird shot at 2:29. Probably the mirror effect/cut with the DJ spin thing also (2:42 I believe). At the beginning the b-roll was fine, but then they just seemed out of place throughout the rest.

Could be tightened up a bit to knock off some of that 3+ minutes. Cut some of the weaker shots maybe, and cut some of the b-roll, etc.

I liked the last shot, and thought it was a nice ending. The tricks were good and kept my attention. Camera work was a little shaky and sometimes didn't quite seem to "get the shot", but it all came together pretty well.

That's about all I can suggest after my initial watch. Good stuff overall...

-brown