SHORT: Lady

I like it. The story was interesting and made me want to know what twist or creative spin you would put in it for part two. There was one part toward the end where the audio track competed with your voice over, but I really want to see what you will do in the continued version.
 
Funny...

But I have to "listen concentrated" to the VO.... And that's not good.

Put your music a little lower, and your VO a little higher...

And yes I know you want it like the music is as loud as the VO, but that the VO sounds louder, but the music doesnt sound low... Well that's done by compressing your VO.
 
That was a nice little first short. It'll only get better trust me, I'm recently starting out doing my own shorts. It was a nice story and I felt for the dog. One question is why the video is so small? Other then whatever else was mentioned, it was an enjoyable first short.
 
I think that viewer on video.me is small however I am posting it on Viemo so he should look better. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
 
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