It's What I Do (Hv20 M2)

Zacatac

Zacatac

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So this is my job... or when I'm actually working it it, i got bored one day, so i went on for a ride to film it..

I do the commentary... during the tour... but its not me in the video

http://vimeo.com/1512611
 
Looks really nice. Cool stuff indeed. I love the shot where you pan from looking down the deck to out on the water, then it looks like you clicked on an ND filter and the sunset came into view. Definitely my favorite shot.

If you're looking for suggestions to improve it, I found myself wanting a little more coverage of the tour aspect. You called it "What I Do" but showed only small snippets of the actual tour. Adding a little of that in, especially early on, will cement that part home. Your job is the story of the piece, so let that show through a little more. Then, with all the beautiful footage backing it up, you'll end up with a very nice video portrait piece. Also, there are a couple shots, either where the focus is shaky or are a little redundant, that you could drop and not lose anything for it.
 
rogue_09 said:
Looks really nice. Cool stuff indeed. I love the shot where you pan from looking down the deck to out on the water, then it looks like you clicked on an ND filter and the sunset came into view. Definitely my favorite shot.

If you're looking for suggestions to improve it, I found myself wanting a little more coverage of the tour aspect. You called it "What I Do" but showed only small snippets of the actual tour. Adding a little of that in, especially early on, will cement that part home. Your job is the story of the piece, so let that show through a little more. Then, with all the beautiful footage backing it up, you'll end up with a very nice video portrait piece. Also, there are a couple shots, either where the focus is shaky or are a little redundant, that you could drop and not lose anything for it.
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I agree completely... i just named it that though for purposes of showing where i work, even though its what i do, but i may go some other night to finish up filming one of my coworkers...

and i changed the aperture on the 35mm lens, thats the ND filter effect you saw
 
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