ozmorphasis
Well-known member
Looks fine. I'm nit picking here:
1. Looks like you're shooting down on him a little. I would have lowered the camera.
2. I would have put the key on the opposite side and used the window light as your fill.
3. I don't like the black tv screen behind him over his head and the horizontal line on the wall. My eyes are drawn to them. I understand it's difficult filming on location. Like other said if the foreground/background ratio. Using things like hair light helps add separation from the background. I think you were fortunate to be able to get away with using only one light.
As someone who still uses hair lights all the time, I have to say that I really appreciate shots that look like one source, so I really appreciate what LKorver has done here in that regard, and I think key looks best 90% of the time when it appears to be motivated by any major light sources in frame, so I'd keep to the windows staying on Key side. Totally agree about the screen.



