SHORT: Irene - My new Short film - GH4

Nice work!

Some really beautiful shots, great locations, and I like the way you handled the colors. Loads of car work, too...not the easiest.

Also some nice moments in the story.

BROAD NOTES:
In my humble opinion, the acting could have been stronger, but casting good actors can be tough when starting out. Also, a few lines in the script felt a little, as they say, "on the nose". But again, it's a great start and this is how you'll hone your sensibilities...by doing and sharing.

Well done!
 
abreu-canedo said:
Nice work!

Some really beautiful shots, great locations, and I like the way you handled the colors. Loads of car work, too...not the easiest.

Also some nice moments in the story.

BROAD NOTES:
In my humble opinion, the acting could have been stronger, but casting good actors can be tough when starting out. Also, a few lines in the script felt a little, as they say, "on the nose". But again, it's a great start and this is how you'll hone your sensibilities...by doing and sharing.

Well done!
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Hi Rafael, thanks so much for taking the time to watch. Really appreciate it. Anyway to give me a more in depth notes on the acting parts you didn't like or which moments you thought were too on the nose? It will help me next time around. Thanks again.
 
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