alex whitmer
Veteran
Top-noth script and solid writing. Really agree with Egg Born Son's assessment - 'Whether this is brilliantly funny or juvenile and reprehensible is going to depend on everyone involved nailing it.' I'm leaning toward brilliantly funny.
I'm a big fan of the shlock films that came out in the 60s and 70s (and 50s), that pushed the moral limits of the period - like a repeat of the pre-code era films giving a big segment of audience what they really wanted, and seeing just what they could get away with. And there were A LOT of them. Nothing beats a good cheesecake. I think you nailed the form spot on.
Tempted to do a line by line. Not much to dismantle, though.
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I'm a big fan of the shlock films that came out in the 60s and 70s (and 50s), that pushed the moral limits of the period - like a repeat of the pre-code era films giving a big segment of audience what they really wanted, and seeing just what they could get away with. And there were A LOT of them. Nothing beats a good cheesecake. I think you nailed the form spot on.
Tempted to do a line by line. Not much to dismantle, though.
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