"Instinct Blues" Merf Clothing Commercial

CodyBrown

CodyBrown

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Hello Everyone,

I just finished a commercial for a clothing company I started with a friend (Merf).

I would love to hear what you guys think! It's pretty short, about a minute.

Like I have said before, do not be afraid to be harsh. I would much rather have honest critiques!

http://codyb.com/merf.htm

Also if you could check out the Merf World website (http://codyb.com/merf/ or http://merfworld.com) that would be sweet as well. The clothing is really awesome, and pretty inexpensive ($12 for a T-Shirt). We use the ever fantastic and socially conscious American Apparel so it is a high quality shirt. If you order in the next week I should be able to send it out before the holidays.

Thanks! Looking forward to your critiques.

-cody

(and yes, I know this song is most certainly copyrighted, but I am doing this for my reel)
 
Looked good. It's always hard to work with stills in a dynamic way. You did a good job.
My one criticism is that it is too long. i think it would work better as a 15sec. spot.

-rook
 
Thanks for the reply Rook. I agree. I thought about splitting it in to a few different "spots" but the song is a bit tough to edit in a way that will sound fluid.

It is interesting how some of these threads get tons of replies while others don't.

I would still love to hear what you guys have to think.

thanks!

-cody
 
you could make it easier to find on your site. Besides that, it'll be a really cool commercial if you cut in by half.
 
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