SHORT: "Insomniac" - RELEASED

richke

richke

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I have released "Insomniac." I am hoping some will take time to watch and let me know what you think. Progress thread link is in my signature.


Thanks,
Rich
 
Some Additional info.

Dave Burrows hosts a late-night radio for the lonely and sleepless people of Philadelphia. Tonight, he will receive a call from his newest fan who may or may not be a serial killer.
Starring
AC McCray
Craig Lemons
Kyle Curtis
Abe Jensen
Darius Devontaye Green
Meg Johnson
Eura Edmond
Rita Allen
Written By
David M. Troop
Music By
Kevin Macleod
Directed/Editied/Produced
Richard Thomas Keel
 
First 30 seconds were a black hole. Then the next minute pacing was tedious and boring with credits, mostly black, and very boring dialog. I wasn't engaged in the first minute and a half of a thirteen minute film, so I gave up. You simply never hooked me from the get go.
 
@chris...First 30 seconds? It was a tribute to my grandmother and friend who passed this year and my company logo? Were you expecting to be wowed right from the get go...that's not even part of the film. I did not think people could get bored at that point...or would think to get bored. But it will stay.

As for the credits it was meant to get an overall feeling that the DJ was careless about his advice to setup the "2 weeks later portion." To each is own but. A movie needs to be setup...imho...that is what the credits were doing...to each his own I guess. That is too bad as a lot of people have enjoyed the film. Not for you I guess. Thanks again for commenting maybe I'll get you with the next one. :)
 
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