Insectarium. My first short with DVX

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Here you can find it

Title: Insectarium.avi (23MB)

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www.gerardogarcia.tk/
In the list that appears, click (right mouse button) the file Insectarium.avi and "Save Target as..."

Let me know your expert opinion.

Rgds. from an expat in Shanghai.
 
Re: Insectarium. My first short with DVX

I thought it was pretty good. If it were me, I would have chosen different music. It was a little overbearing and should have been more subtle, IMO.

Most of the shots were well composed. The lighting was a little uneven, particularly at the end (the next morning?), it seemed a little dark.

The mom continuously shaking her head was a little annoying after a while but I wouldn't worry about that so much.

Overall, I think it was a good effort.

By the way, Quicktime is the preferred file format on this board because Mac users won't be able to view your file so I'd suggest you re-encode as a Quicktime file.
 
Re: Insectarium. My first short with DVX

Yes, I agree with disjecta.

One question. What did you do with the grasshopper? You know it is against animal rights to kill them, right? :D Just joking!!!

All the best

Fidel.
 
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