Images from my first feature...

[ahmedmalik]

What do you guys think? The grabs aren't the best though... sorry.

 

[avatuar]

The first two look well not great, very hardcore 16mm b&w borederline security camera. In the last the lighting is interesting but overdone. You applied too much film grain. For more realistic looking grain make smaller ganules the way you have it just makes it look pixelated. I would soften the green light down a bit and bring all your levels down for a darker more crushed image as I assume this is supposed to be a suspesful/scary scene. Being straightforward, please don't take what I tell you to heart as your movie is what you want it to be. period. it's art. I just want to help you get the most out of your dvx

 

[jpbankesmercer]

I agree. Nice comps though. I love a hangin.
Jp

 

[ahmedmalik]

Thank you for you responses guys. I reallty appreciate them.

 

[Chance White]

I agree with Avataur and JP...

WAAAAAAY too much grain.