IFHY: Help Me Decide. Vote for a LOGLINE/SYNOPSIS.

[Zak Forsman]

I can't settle on a Pitch, aka Logline, aka Synopsis for "I (F*CKING) HATE YOU" . Would you please vote for one of the following? OR maybe come up with a better one based on what you read here and in my thread?

PITCH #1 – "I F*CKING HATE YOU" is the raw, whimsical story of a young man who formulates an ill-conceived scheme to redeem himself in the eyes of his ex-girlfriend.

PITCH #2 – "I F*CKING HATE YOU" a raw, love-hate story between the "I" longing for the lovely “You” – and what it means to love a hate song.

PITCH #3 – "I F*CKING HATE YOU" a last effort to stoke the flames again with his former lover – a young man concocts a plan to get her back to his apartment in an effort to strike a chord.

PITCH #4 – "I F*CKING HATE YOU" a young man concocts a plan to get his ex-girlfriend back to his apartment for his final effort to win her back.

Thank you!!! :dankk2::dankk2:

 

[Brandon Rice]

First one.

 

[drmental]

is she F***ing famous? i vote for the second one

is she F***ing famous? i vote for the second one

she looks like someone famous, but i can't place her
i cant wait to see this one
Dr.M

 

[Zak Forsman]

Amy Adams? Nicole Kidman? Naomi Watts? she hears those the most.