------ I SEE YOU ------ a film by Cristian Hozven

[hoz]

Definitely a big improvement from your previous entries. Really good to see that!.

I liked the concept and the acting was very good for the most part.
i thought the story was wandering a little bit, but it was still enjoyable. It might have helped to give your character some kind of goal, like "I see dead people and don't want to anymore", or some other feeling about the ghosts.
On that note: what was the quest? I guess I didn't get that.

Looks like you have a great young actor on your hands!

Your tech side of filmmaking is better too. When you output for the web, it might look better if you slap a deinterlace filter on everything.

Good job. Looking forward to the next one.

many thanks for the words! first- the quest was a simple one - to get to school. i ran out of time in my short but if i had placed the shot of the school at the end i think this would've helped a lot. as for more goal oriented- i didn't want to get crazy there because i had only 6 minutes, this is more or less an intro to phin and his world. i hope to lure you into wanting to see more of his life and into what might happen to him.

i too can't wait to see your next work - your stuff rocks.


as for deinterlace filter- good idea! how do i do that?