I did Susannah ... and could really use critiques

[Jim Montgomery]

Susannah, for those who don't now, is an OpenCut competition. They supply the script, storyboard, footage and on set audio. The rest is up tp you.

I think I have a locked edit but would really appreciate any input you all care to give.

PM me for the password if you can help. Give ya'all something to do while waiting on Timefest!

Thanks

Jim

http://www.vimeo.com/1138802

 

[Jim Montgomery]

Thanks to all those who found the time to offer their advice. The many words of wisdom were much appreciated.

 

[Capt Quirk]

"I did Susannah ... and could really use critiques"
Well, I was going to say you need to ask her for the critique. Unless there is video. I tried to look at the video, but it was password protected.

 

[sfoster]

me too! Passwords suck!