I did a commercial for a local Running Store... What do you think?

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Suneal

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Hey Everyone,
I'm trying to start my own little marketing company with a friend. This was the first commercial we shot - and did it for free for portfolio work.

Let me know what you guys think. We initially shot for a different concept, but in editing we found it didnt have the same impact we hoped. Luckily we changed the concept up and I actually like it a lot better. I'm especially a big fan of stupid simple things like that tracking at the end.

Enough about what I think... Lets hear what ya'll think..

100% t3i.




Suneal (www.collectedmedia.ca)
 
Speaking generally: a few things - Accept the obsession. Thought that worked though the bouncing text seems a little miss placed. End title plate needs another workout.

You need to pace this up a bit - his obsession - running, seems a little mundane. We dont need to see so much of him waking up, brushing his teeth etc.
 
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