HVX Zoo Commercial...Rough cut

i think the chimpanzee spot needs more cuts. it is too qobbly to go as a "normal" ad and it is not wobbly enough to go as a handycam-visitor video. it is somewhere in between. i am sure you guys have more meat on the table to edit that tighter.

the giraffe is sweet. great shot.
 
I agree, chimp spot can use some work. Maybe more closeup views and tightening.
Voiceover grated on me for some reason. Music might help. Giraffe spots are great
and exposure/focus is immaculate.
 
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