Horror Script that didn't make it.

[Charli]

I didn't get to polish the script, fix the exposition,
blah, blah, blah.

 

[Fugitive]

Interesting. As the lead charcter would say.

 

[Charli]

Fug - good one. The only part of the script that I was married to was the
lead running. If we could just keep that and the sheer desperation she
was to exhibit, no problem-o in script changes. EVERYTHING got cut.
If this were a bbq I would have been charrred-grilled.

The Black Angel script is better, has a great "creep" factor, holds
truer to the old fashion, "scare you to death" style.

I'll post the Black Angel script once the contest in underway. Look for it
under the Black Angel thread.

 

[kimko]

i liked it, the build up was good.

 

[Charli]

Thank, Kimko, nice of you to say.

 

[Charli]

Laugh, cry, critize it to bits, no worries. It won't see the light of day other
that the page it's written on.