"Home" A new short

For sound:

- I miss handling sounds (foley)
- ambiance sounds
- effect sounds


Image/editing

- some shots are not needed... Watch out what you see in shots (chair around 00:37 is taking to much attention)

Story:

- I don't understand the story.. I can "imagine" and make a story by myself
but that's not the purpose I think....
 
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