SHORT: Hey guys check out my short film

[fatemo]

I am new to filmmaking, the quality isn't great and it's low budget so the resources that I had was really limited. Let me know what you guys think of it and checkout my other short films as well. I be sure to make more movies soon.

My latest movie
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=938drFqkTHg

 

[Disease8]

hey dude to be totally frank it seems you should have spent more than 5 hours on this. Its just a jokes film but its too jokes its too loosely edited, too long. The shots are not framed well. The sound, sounds fake. I think the camera has pretty good quality for a phone. When you frame a person you don't want all that space above their heads, move the frame lower. Some reverb helps to meld sounds together in the mix and some variation on light switch sounds would have been better. Maybe get a small portable recorder like a Zoom one and record you own sound, sync it to the camera in post. Keep it up.