here are some new edits am working on.

Great job! What a riot. You clearly are having fun. Great tone and mood. It made me give up my ambition to be a hit man.

One thought in the first sequence, I noticed that both actors in the dialog were facing screen left. You might want to reverse one of them so their eyeline enhances the confrontation.

The deep voiced hitman and the man in the mirror have great stage presence.

Thanks for the encouragement!
 
If I'm looking at things right, the deeper voiced guy is in front of the music man, looking off camera at music gear. If this is the case, you don't need to flip the shot so they are looking at each other. But it might be nice to have an over the shoulder (of the music man) establishing shot so we can see where the deeper voiced guy is in relation.
 
The deep voice guy is sitting down with his back to the other guy standing up.
They are both face the music gear, later on in the film it is reviled that the deep
Voice guy who is sitting down has a reflector in his glasses where he can see
Behind him.
The other part of the story is it’s me Anthony playing the deep voice guy who
Is name Max Donavan, I didn’t know any other Actors who can play this part
Like I can so I just went for it, that’s why I only show up in person in the film
3 times, so it’s just easer for me to just pop up on agents TVs, computers, I pod,
And bill boards. Other then that I think in the future I’ll stick to the
Cinamaphotogrphy, and leave the acting for the pros.
 
Detail level + 6
V detail level 0
Detail coring + 4
Chroma level + 4
Chroma phase 0
Color temp - 1
Master PED -3
A IRIS LEVEL -1
CINELIKE V
KNEE AUTO
MATRIX CINELIKE
SKIN TONE DTL OFF
V DETAIL FREQ MID
PROGRESSIVE 24P
 
yeh i liked it...audio levels were off ..but as u say ur not dont yet. the line about " well if this is living i looking forward to dying" or something like that had me crackin up yo! i actually bucked up on some of ur stuff on youtube b4 this. anyway i likes. soon get my 100b..cant wait
 
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