hello i put this here before, so watch again if ud like.

so please feel free to say whatever u wish, be brass be honest if u like it cool if u hate it cool, either which way im glad to know. thanx.
 
Okay, comments:

I really liked it before it went comedic.

I thought the tension was really good, except for the beat around that girl.

All of that tension was completely broken when the girl starts firing.

I don't know what your story is supposed to be about, but the comedy killed it for me.
 
lol well thank u for the honesty, yeah, the timing can be a lil off the only people on set at the same time was the guy with two guns and the girl and when it her close up shes the only one there, that was kinda my goal was to make it tense and see if i could make it look like a real movie and then snap any emotional ties with absurdity, it happend while editing none of it was planned that way but i fel while editing that i couldnt hold on to the tension and had to just go off.
 
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