SHORT: Having a high time (csulb)

move the sound 1 frame to the right.... It's a bit out of sync. Or maybe 2 frames.

To be honnest the sound, framing, editing is ....Wel....not that much impressive..

The story itself is funny. So with some technical improvements....it can become much better.

- have different shots with different framings
- don't be scared to do a take more then once
- don't be scared to wait for an airplane, a dog, a cat, a boat passing, terminator passing by...etc... Untill they're gone. Or ask them to be quiet.
- have a soundguy (real one, or doing soundcourses)
- Also take care of the sound in the edit (or have a sound editor/mixer).
 
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Chris
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Well, if the goal was maximal astonishment for the view, and not in a good way... leave it as it is... But I think a serious look to tightening up the shots, get more of a 'transition' from
the guys smoking dope, to alleyway assualt, etc.

In fact, I have no idea why that was in there at all...

Most of the shots were about 30 seconds too long, and the jokes really didn't do anything for me...

In the shots with the three guys, by keeping two in the shot for 'long periods', you miss the ability to overlap voice with edits. So as it is currently shot, you sort of have
to dwell on these two (for the most part) much longer than need be. If you had done a 'over the shoulder', or the like, you could over lap the dialog and squeeze quite
a bit of time out of those segments.

The Alley scene suffers from the same problem, in addition to being an 'action' sequence where there's almost no action, and I really don't think the
girl is in any real danger, and the murderous machete hacker spends far too long on one or two slices...
 
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