FEATURE: Have You Ever Felt That You're Being Followed?

[Yahvel]

I'm kinda new to this whole Filmmaking and video editing world but i really love it and i hope to get real good at it. I'm shooting this film with a Canon 550D/T2i with a 18mm-200mm f/3.5 lens and a 28mm f/1.8 USM accompanied with a GLIDECAM HD 1000 Stabilizer and im currently editing it in Sony Vegas Pro 9 and Adobe Premiere CS5. In some scenes the lighting is horrible and in others is ok but like i said im new at this but im starting to get the hang of it. I still need to buy some scrims and flag.

 

[dre83]

00:23 the sound effects are ok, but they sound to close, it needs some EQ and reverb to make it sound more coming from a cellphone and in a place.

I also miss ambiance sound. Ambiance sounds can be used to introduce the location: a moawing cow, sirenes, traffic, birds, a chicken.... it all desides the location

The sound effects aren't also 100% sync.. it's the sync FEELING that's important

I would also start with the cellphone shot (with the music on it) I as a viewer don't realy care if it's a big house or small house or appartment or doghouse...

The music also is to much....it doesn't fit.... Don't use music because you think you have to and because it sounds cool and excited and fantastic in another film.
Music that sounds great and fantastic and wonderfull and whoooow in one film, can sound very annoying, bad, ugly in another.

You also have a wrong helicopter sound.. The one you have is a helicopter passing from right to left, the one in the picture is passing more from left to right.

 

[Yahvel]

thank you so much for your feedback!!! you have no idea how much that means to me because i am new at this and i really want to learn and get better...i took all your advices and im gonna start working on it ASAP!!! thanks!!!