Have a look at my HVX200 short 'Others around you'

That was great! I liked the music, and the fact that you got to the point right away. Every shot furthers the story and the characters. Some 2 min shorts feel like 20, yours felt like 20 seconds. It leaves me wanting more.

Now you just need to unsqeeze that 16:9 so it plays correctly on youtube.

You got talent. Keep it up.
 
Thanks guys

Thanks guys

Thanks everyone glad you liked it! Yeah I have yet to find out how to post properly on youtube...

narayan
 
That was great storytelling. I loved it. Excellent Short Structure. Nice job with the camera work to.
 
The thing I liked best was cinematography and editing. Very creative shots and sequences.

The premise is OK. I didn't find it particularly clever or funny, but it was sufficiently so for a short film.

I also liked the fact that this was a silent film. Great job!
 
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im going to have to disagree with everyone here. i think there were a lot of inconsistencies and the cheesy fire and title graphics further hacked it up.

good start, but a handful of fatal errors ruined it.
 
nice job, it was pretty funny to me, not laugh out loud funny, but entertaining and made me chuckle. . good camera work.

i agree the motion graphics were kinda weak, but being as it's a comedy i think you can get away with it. nobody's expecting lord of the ring CG animation at this level. at least i'm not. ;)
 
Before it is screened at next years' Cannes Festival I am sure he will work on the graphics to conform with the top level crtics everywhere and here.
Good job. Keep on working on your craft. That is what is important.
 
yeah, why have an HVX if you're going to put it on youtube? other than that it was well written and executed. The animated stuff took away from it, but other than that it was excellent.
 
Enjoyed the story line alot and most of the shots, but the graphics kind of ruined your efforts... But always fixable!
 
That was GREAT. Being entertaining and creative is a thousand times more important that 'seeing it' in HD or worrying about anything technical like what type of camera was used.

Excellent job.
 
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