COMMERCIAL: Hair Commercials

[DanKov]

Hey Guys,

Never shared my work on here before but I shot a series of cosmetic commercials a few weeks ago and feel like sharing some stills. Feedback is welcome!

 

[Cryogenic Filmworks]

1,2,5 not lit. 3, better but seems to be missing something like maybe filll light. on the front. I don't know. Maybe just me. 4 best lit but looks like it was making full use of sunlight. Back to 5. Looks like you exposed for the window. Should have let the window blow and and expose for the subjects or use ND on the window. Just my observations.

 

[DanKov]

Thanks for the feedback. I'd be interested in why you think 1,2,and 5 weren't lit.

 

[Cryogenic Filmworks]

They are very dark. Maybe lit but not lit right for a cosmetic commercial for sure. Commercials in general seem to be very lit up so you can see what it is they are selling.