Guilt Ridden

im in a hurry here... could only watch first minute or so... but man, the first scene was way too long, i was bored out of my mind. definitely shorten that up unless you plan to put opening credits or titles there. will watch the rest later. (hate to half-ass the viewing and then critique... i'll give you the benefit of the doubt for the rest of it)

cool avatar, by the way.
:beer:cheers! -kyle
 
it would be a good idea, it's one of those things that people do when they first start shooting, they try to make their stuff as long as they can, but what they should be doing is making it as short as they can without effecting the story or confusing the audience... unless you actually want really slow beats in your scenes, in that case then mission accomplished
 
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