Goodbye Laughter - DVX Short Film

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This is a film I just completed for my multimedia class called Goodbye Laughter. It is the account of Adam Kweller and how he once lost his laughter/sense of humor by gambling it away in a game of dice.

We shot this with the DVX-100B in 2 days and I edited it using Sony Vegas 7.0

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DFBnY2C6mhs

Let me know what you think and what I can improve on in the future. :)
 
The video is OK, is funny and all, but sometimes I got drawn away from the action because I had to read so much.

"Dice" is misspelled when the main fight is going on.

Good work overall, maybe a little bit more color correction next time, or better lighting methods.
 
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