The guy who had fallen down after the kids ran off was actually knocked over by the kids, but that part was removed to cut it down to time.My issues weren't with the story really. It was odd, quirky, and fun. Very different. I actually enjoyed it.
It was the sound issues that took me out of it the most.
I haven't read through the thread. Who's glasses were sitting on the tombstone as he walked by near the beginning? Crew?
And the guy lying down as the kids ran off, more crew?
Loved the ghost. Reminded me of Dennis Hopper.
Keep at it!
Yeah, however it was not something I didn't expect. This fest was full of great filmmakers, I was just happy to be part of them, win or lose.
I have some really awesome ideas for my next entry, me and my crew are working on script. I am going to work on better dialog, as well as more cinematic lighting techniques. I am using McMenemins Bar on 82nd to shoot in, really excited to about that! They said I could film there pretty much anytime of the day before 5 on fridays and saturdays.
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