Geese and Kayak adventure

nice always like nature, the music is good but imo it doesn't do, in this. i would much rather hear the sounds of nature; the water as you paddle, the grass crunching as they waddle past the camera. maybe touch up the editting, some dead spots. nice and calming very good!
 
Yup, second the audio stuff, more water sounds, nature and so forth. Also different sizes on you in the kayak would have been better. Example: the shot of you paddlling toward camera, another shot tighter, the shot lasted too long. Cross dissolves or layering of shots would have helped a lot.
 
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Yeah, I just got a few random shots of my sister paddling. About the audio, my other sister created that song and I told her I would use it which I should have waited for a more appropriate video. Thanks for the comments.
 
I liked your transition to the geese from the kayaking, specificially the final shot of kayaking with the geese in the toward the horizon line.

You could definitely tighten up your shots so that when you rack focused it's a slightly faster experience. It seems like the shots wait too long to come into focus. I really like your final shot though between the goose and the long grass blades. Great DOF. Returning to shots of kayaking toward the end would bring a sense of circular structure to it, too. Awesome shooting. I thought the music went quite well with the subject; the music has a patient, playful feel to it and so do your visuals.
 
Wow this is good Kayak thread i like this actually i was in searching for kayak riding information and thinking to make a thread for this information but i have no need to make any thread now after read out this thread anyways thansk for this informaiton and have a nice day...
 
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