SHORT: G9

I'm watching it now and I'll give some thoughts while I'm watching

- add some reverb on the Foley (the footsteps), they sound a little to "obvious" for me. And let them come "closer".
You can do that by having more "reverb level" in stead of "direct level" and then higher the direct level and play a bit with the reverb level
- the footsteps on the stairs, I know we don't see anything, but...sometimes it feels "there's something not right here". I think when the camera goes
to the floor nr sign, there are a few steps to much there..or to fast.

- use different kinds of shoes...

- it's a litle bit get boring...so I skipped a few things...

You need a lot of other sounds also... you can't "escape with it" by saying "oh well, I'll add some music, add some Foley sounds and that will do". I also miss human sounds, breathings, backgroundsound, ambiance sounds,... Like when the stand up from the chair, suddenly the sound of the chair is "broken"...that sound very weird, strange...
It isn't always sync neither... Like around 03:00 when the lady gets up... You need some kind of "ambiance sound" and a continous "chair creaking sound to make it more fluent.
 
Thanks Dre83..I'm not good at using the sound...but when i read your comment ,I realize my film have many mistakes...I will learn to fix this mistake...Thanks a lot
 
And try to make something good of 5 minutes, rather then wanting to make something of 15 minutes but that gets....boring.
 
oh...I see..but now i don't know how to make this in 5 minutes...hahaha...But i will learn ....:cheesy:
and I love this film.....Sorry....Your comment is true but i still keep like this. Honestly I will remember your comment to use for the next film.... I'm still a student
 
well it was not specifically for THIS film...just in general. But I think some scenes can be shortened.
 
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