SHORT: Future War (ACTION FILM)

[FONZOfilms]

Hey guys I recently got after effects and wanted to create a test film to work on some vfx. Check out my test film and would like feedback on effects.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BMvv2...el_video_title

If you like what you saw, check out the rest of my channel.

 

[Doc Bernard]

Ahh, a G36C and an M4. Okay, it looked good.......but.

The tape on the G36's orange tip was obvious. The blood spray was overdone. Bullet hits on the trees don't flash, just use a little dust and particles the same color or lighter than the material. Remember, less is more. Sorry, I am a "gun wrangler" and I immediately snap onto those details.


But your framing/subject matter kept my interest.


The teleport was interesting. Why purple?

 

[FONZOfilms]

Yes I noticed later on that the tape was coming off, I don't want to paint them because last time I got in trouble with the law. As purple for teleportation it was merely to experiment with darker colors than the typically grey smoke.tthanks for the feedback though, its important I look focus on those details next time.