Funny G.I. Joe Action Short

what....what was that! hahaha...quite funny indeed! Loved how the audio got real soft before "the scene". A nice little piece of forboding. keep up the good work.
 
seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is ****ing rad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok, i watched again...this is very funny...and i thought i would give some constructive criticism.

the only problem with this short is the screen direction...it makes it a little confusion when you see one character looking in the same direction as the other...you have it correct when the guys run or shoot towards each other...but when the guy throws the granade he is facing the same screen direction as the other guy. it happens again when the guys pull their guns...same side...anyway, its a simple fix, just flip the shots of one of the guys and its fixed.

welll done guys! :thumbup:
 
the best part- it gets homo and you're like 'wtf.' then the credits role, and it gets more homo and you're like 'maybe i should be gay'
 
"and you're like 'maybe i should be gay'"

OMG, I know. VoiceFX Duke is so ripped. Maybe his fairy godmother will come and turn him into a real man. Then I'd totally "switch teams." He can fire my gun any day.
Ok, that's enough.
 
Can Scanner said:
"and you're like 'maybe i should be gay'"

OMG, I know. VoiceFX Duke is so ripped. Maybe his fairy godmother will come and turn him into a real man. Then I'd totally "switch teams." He can fire my gun any day.
Ok, that's enough.
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lmao
 
Rich Lee! Thank you for that comment. I did notice that when I started editing, and obviously I got used to it and forgot. I'll go back and flip a few shots when I get a chance.
I broke what is called the rule of 180. When there are two actors, the line that forms between them should never be crossed by the camera. Of course there are exceptions, but I was running back and forth across that line like a madman. Most people don't notice it. Good eye.
 
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