Fun With Slow Motion

Looks good, not quite as cool as those 2000+ fps high-speed cameras that you can find with footage of waterballoons. Those are sweet.
 
Nice short. It kept my attention thru. Very well pieced together.
I thought the flow was very good. and u put alot of effort into finding different locations to keep your colour pallette full. Although a little CC in post could have tweaked this more. Your range of coulours were vast except they all seemed a little dull.. (straight from camera?)

I realy liked your editing in the beggining scence but thought it was a little less strong in her flash back moments.

There were definitely some strong camera compositions but again others were weaker.. the condradiction of strong and weak can become obvious. and appear very 'indie'. Pride yourself of structuring all your shots before hand and sometimes when unsure of one play it back on your cam to check if u liked it.

I liked how your composition and editing indroduced her as the 'clerk' at the end. very nice!
I enjoyed this. th audio was good too with regards to editing and scence changes.

I would like to see this short again with some finer CC'

good job.
i'll agree to the 3 star rating above.
 
Bezakor said:
Nice short. It kept my attention thru. Very well pieced together.
I thought the flow was very good. and u put alot of effort into finding different locations to keep your colour pallette full. Although a little CC in post could have tweaked this more. Your range of coulours were vast except they all seemed a little dull.. (straight from camera?)

I realy liked your editing in the beggining scence but thought it was a little less strong in her flash back moments.

There were definitely some strong camera compositions but again others were weaker.. the condradiction of strong and weak can become obvious. and appear very 'indie'. Pride yourself of structuring all your shots before hand and sometimes when unsure of one play it back on your cam to check if u liked it.

I liked how your composition and editing indroduced her as the 'clerk' at the end. very nice!
I enjoyed this. th audio was good too with regards to editing and scence changes.

I would like to see this short again with some finer CC'

good job.
i'll agree to the 3 star rating above.
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A poor attempt at sarcasm maybe?

CaptM
 
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