Fixed My Promo - Thanks Everyone For The Help

[ministerfortson]

Just wanted to thank those people that helped me out and gave suggestions on how to make my promo better. Here is the new version of it. If you have any comments or suggestions, please let me know
[h=6]http://youtu.be/bXO13KpO2Ko[/h]For those that have not seen it, it is work safe. No nudity or profanity.

 

[j1clark@ucsd.edu]

Just wanted to thank those people that helped me out and gave suggestions on how to make my promo better. Here is the new version of it. If you have any comments or suggestions, please let me know
http://youtu.be/bXO13KpO2Ko

For those that have not seen it, it is work safe. No nudity or profanity.

A couple of 'techniques' I didn't like... the jarring camera movement on a could of shots of the guy, didn't 'get me into the film'. The last shot of the girl blurred out didn't either... I think you need to have her in 'focus' to connect 'Jezebel's House', presumably the girl's name... to the preceding images.

 

[ministerfortson]

Thanks for the feedback. We had 2 versions of the jarring shots, one with a tripod, but it looks boring. Just my personal preference. Also, in the actual movie, the girl walks into focus, but we were going for suspense in the promo.