SHORT: First to go...

Well, the idea is good... The ending is "surprising" in a way... and also funny... (don't know if that was ment to be ?)

Now, the acting.....bad. They just said there lines and it sounded like they were happy they new there lines.
The sound: it was the on camera mic... But then always record ambiance sounds to make it more "smoothly" between two shots (wind, no wind, wind, no wind)

But the idea of the story is good to me.
 
For putting up new shorts every other week you guys do awesome :) I don't know how you find the time, but it shows commitment so keep them coming
 
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