SHORT: First Taste - (Release)

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fcrabbath

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Hey guys, just wanted to share FIRST TASTE with you. It's for a contest we shot for 2 weekends ago. A few notes, the film was a different kind of film and the theme isn't one I really liked in the first place, but it's always good to try something new.
I do hope you guys enjoy it!


FIRST TASTE ~
APPROX 13 MINS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-x0nYyjDHc


Screenshots below.


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Cheers,
FC
 
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In general it's good. I like the choise of the dogs, there small, cute, sweet... Which makes the effect better.

The ambiance sounds are nice also. Don't know if they're coming from a library ?

"It's like you lost a whole petstore"
"you ask a lot of questions, I don't like that"
" then you get it wrong I'm a married man"

something is missing here...Or do you want to say that every guy that's married has a difficult wife that doesn't like to be questioned when she does something ?
 
I think the phrase that's missing is: "I want to go to bed with you" or alternative... But maybe then they had to put PG18 :-p
 
Well in the case of this character, she says everything that's on her mind. IE- the line where she says she doesn't like someone she says it. Just how she doesn't like someone who askes questions. Not really a commentary on wives just a comment from this particular character..


Thanks for watching guys!
 
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